TAI #6 Baseline Data and Evidence Con't

Analysis of Perceptions Toward English Writing

I was so interested to have some ideas on the perceptions students have toward their English writing. These peceptions or student voice, I could say, complement really well the quantitative information I gathered so far from their ELLP results. I learn way more about my learners when they convey their views and feelings to me, rather than always relying on their assessment performance, which I believe can be impacted by their personal cirmcumstances and context at that time. 

In analysing students' perceptions on the survey items, I tried to stay as close as posible to the way Lin (2015) used in her study - where the instrument was modified from. However, I diverted and used the data in other ways that provided me with what I was looking for in terms of identifying their writing difficulties, but in also having specific information about my individual learners which was more important to me.

I used the descriptive statistics - frequency, means, and perceptages - to analyze the survey items and how they represent the student writing difficulty. I did not look at the standard deviation as I thought I only had a small number of students. The mean score for each item was measured by the average score for the total eight students. As in the previous study, I regarded the mean score of each item larger or equal to 4 to constitute placement in the most difficult (or positive) item category depending on the Likert-scale.

One diversion I had was simply putting together the scales of 'somewhat agree', 'agree', and 'strongly agree' as one scale - agree - and 'strongly disagree', 'disagree', 'somewhat disagree' as one scale - disagree - in the Likert-scale. I then simply calculated the percentages. I did that because I was simply interested in identifying individual learners who agree or disagree with an item of particular significance to my knowing them and the differentiated instruction approach to use. 

Results:

It is interesting to find that at the top of ranking the survey items are three psychological and emotional items which appear to impact the students' writing in very positive ways. They have the highest mean scores of 5 and above, and with the agree and disagree scales I created, there was 100% agreement. 

These items are:

• They like to share my English writing with my English teachers (highest)
• They like to use computer technology (such e-mail, online discussion or internet) in my writing class
• They like and learn to write better from the corrective feedback given by my teacher on my writing

For me the first and the third items indicate the importance of what teachers deliver in the classroom and their relationships with the student. They like and not shy or scare to share their English writing with the English teachers because they would surely learn from the feedback teachers give. Teacher's corrective feedback and use of computer technology are effective strategies to use in writing instruction. Refer to the following 2 tables for that information.

Table 1: Ranking of Survey Items/Dimension by Means
Rank	Survey Items								Dimension	Mean
1	38. I like to share my English writing with my English teachers....								Psych/Emo	5.63
2	35. I like to use computer technology (such e-mail, online discussion or internet) in my writing class								Psych/Emo	5.5
	43.  I learn to write better from the corrective feedback given by my teacher on my writing								Psych/Emo	5.5

 

Perceptions and Writing Difficulties 100% (8/8)
Psychological/Emotional
Technology	34	I like to use computer technology (such e-mail, online discussion or internet) in my writing class.....		agree
EL teacher	38	I like to share my English writing with my English teachers..		agree
Correct feedback	43	I learn to write better from the corrective feedback given by my teacher on my writing		agree

 

There were 2 other psychological and emotional items scored high in mean scores =ranking, one positive - ranked 4 (M=5.13) and one negative - ranked 5 (M=5). These items are: 

• I feel confident as an ESOL student at school
• I have anxiety about writing in English

It is great to see English language learners in my inquiry not shy or feel inadeguate in who they are, but very confident and accept that they are there to learning English as their second language. It is understandable that they have anxiety about writing in English. What is more important is for me to employ strategies which can help filtered their affective circumstances. 

There are two cognitive and linguistic items identified at the top 5 ranks. These explain two writing difficulties among learners of my inquiry group. They are:

• When I write in English, I stop many times to think about what to write - ranked 3 (M=5.38) - the top cognitive and linguistic difficulty for the learners.
• I have trouble focusing ideas (arguments) that are related to the points that I am trying to make - ranked 5 (M=5) - the second to the top cognitive and linguistic difficulty.    

These two difficulties are to do with a lack of knowledge or ideas they have to write about in their writing. More than that there is a reflection of difficulty they have in developing and structuring ideas. The lack of knowledge and ideas can be related to the limited exposure that they had in the language contexts they just came from, or perhaps they are made to write about content they are less familiar with. 

One social and cultural item ranked in the top 5 was:

• I like to give feedback and suggestions to other people’s English writing (M=5) 

This is really a reflection of cultural backgrounds they come from - the giving, expecatations, and how they watch out for each other in their families and societies. For me there is an implication here to employ instructional strategies which might engage this strength in the learning.

So far, one very important and interesting finding from this perceptions survey shows that the English writing difficulties of English language learners in my inquiry group have - cognitive and linguistic, psychological and emotional, social and cultural elements. They show the extent of the nature of their learning challenge and they also point to the nature of instruction perovided to help these learners.

Table A following also shows more survey items categorized using the same process of claculating their mean scores. These items have a range of means scores 4 - 4.75. As with items of 5 or above mean scores, these items still explain very strong learning difficulties. It is also important to point out that these writing difficulties have cultural, psychological, and linguistic implications for a responsive teaching.

Table A: Survey Items at ranks 6 - 12  Mean scores of 4 - 4.74)
Eighteen survey items were categorized in these ranks with a range mean scores of 4 - 4.74. They are still regarded as having a high range of writing difficulties or positive items.
Cognitive and Linguistic
Ideas	Grammar	Vocabulary
- I have difficulty generating ideas for my writing - I have difficulty writing a thesis statement - I feel that I have trouble writing logically and systematically in English. - I have difficulty organizing ideas - When writing an English essay, I have trouble writing an introduction, some paragraphs to make my points, and a conclusion.	- I write short and simple sentences. - I am aware of what sentence fragments are, but I still use them - I know what run-on sentences are, but I still use them Parts of speeches: -  I have difficulty using prepositions (such as ‘on’, ‘in’, ‘at’) - I have difficulties using verb tenses within a paragraph	- I have difficulty with word choice (such as ‘quarrel’ or ‘debate’ - I have difficulty spelling correctly -  I don’t have enough time to finish my English writing exams or assignments in a limited time period
Psychological and Emotional
32. I have low confidence in English writing (rank 11, M=4.12	- I am motivated to learn English writing in the future (rank 6 - M=4.75 - I am confident in my writing in my native language writing
Social and cultural
- I feel comfortable with sharing my English writing with other ELL students	- I have difficulty adjusting my way of writing in my native language writing to New Zealand thought patterns.

Table B below similarity shows more survey items from the online questionnaire which were also categorized into levels of difficulties using the same descriptive statistic of mean scores, but these range from low end of M=3.12 to M=3.87. These have similar nature as items in Table A or items with mean scores of 5 or above, except that they are with lesser degrees of difficulties. 

Table B: Survey Items at ranks 13 - 19   Mean scores of 3.12 - 3.87
Ten  survey items were categorized in these ranks with a range mean scores of 4 - 4.74. They are still regarded as having a high range of writing difficulties or positive items.
Cognitive and Linguistic
Ideas	Grammar	Vocabulary
- I have difficulty writing closing sentences for my paragraph - Sometimes I start writing something, then in the end I write something else. - I have difficulty summarizing my larger argument into a conclusion. - I find it difficult to go from one paragraph to another with smooth, well-connected transitions	Parts of speech - I have difficulty using articles (such as ‘a’, ‘the’, and ‘an’) - I have difficulty with word order in English sentences Punctuation - I have difficulty using punctuation
Psychological and Emotional
- I like to write English essays	- I feel my writing assignments are interesting and meaningful.	- I feel comfortable revising my writing in English

 

The mean scores of the nine survey items on the online questionnaire were similarily measured and rated and they were at the ranks of 20 down to 26 with mean scores of 2.75 down to only 2. They are regarded as items with lesser levels of difficulties. These items are shown on Table 1 at Appendix 1 below. 

In closing, the information on the students' perceptions toward English writing are very important complimentary information to quantitative data already collected about the learners' profile and the nature of the learning challenge explored in this inquiry. In summary, they show the following:

• What the learners' writing needs are many and they are at varing levels of difficulties depending on the learners - their exposure to language and knowledge and their individual characteristics.
• The learners' writing needs are not only cognitive and linguistic, but they are psychological and emotional, and they have some social and cultural implications.
• These writing difficulties have implications for a variety of cognitive and linguistic, psychological and emotional, and social and cultural responsive approaches to be used in teaching if these needs are to be addressed.    

  

Appendix 1

Table 1: Ranking of Survey Items/Dimension by Means
Rank	Survey Items								Dimension	Mean
1	38. I like to share my English writing with my English teachers....								Psych/Emo	5.63
2	35. I like to use computer technology (such e-mail, online discussion or internet) in my writing class								Psych/Emo	5.5
3	29. When I write in English, I stop many times to think about what to write								Cog/lin	5.38
4	44. I feel confident as an ESOL student at school								Psych/Emo	5.13
5	24. I have trouble focusing ideas (arguments) that are related to the points that I am trying to make								Cog/lin	5
	30. I have anxiety (worry) about writing in English								Psych/Emo	5
	40. I like to give feedback and suggestions to other people’s English writing								Soci/Cult	5
6	4. I write short and simple sentences.								Cog/lin	4.75
	15. I have difficulty generating ideas for my writing								Cog/lin	4.75
	17. I am aware of what sentence fragments are, but I still use them (for example, My school offers many subjects. Such as English, Maths, and Music.)								Cog/lin	4.75
	23. I have difficulty writing a thesis statement								Cog/lin	4.75
	42. I am motivated to learn English writing in the future								Psych/Emo	4.75
7	31. I am confident in my writing in my native language writing (such as Samoan, Filipino, Tongan, Burmese, Tuvaluan								Psych/Emo	4.62
	37. I feel comfortable with sharing my English writing with other ELL students								Soci/Cult	4.62
8	16. I have difficulty adjusting my way of writing in my native language writing to New Zealand thought patterns.								Soci/Cult	4.6
9	11. I have difficulty with word choice (such as ‘quarrel’ or ‘debate’								Cog/lin	4.5
	19. I know what run-on sentences are, but I still use them (for example, The boy showed us his tickets someone gave them to him)								Cog/lin	4.5
10	22. I feel that I have trouble writing logically and systematically in English.								Cog/lin	4.25
11	14. I have difficulty spelling correctly.....								Cog/lin	4.12
	25. I have difficulty organizing ideas								Cog/lin	4.12
	32. I have low confidence in English writing								Psych/Emo	4.12
12	8. I have difficulty using prepositions (such as ‘on’, ‘in’, ‘at’)								Cog/lin	4
	9. I have difficulties using verb tenses within a paragraph (such as ‘say’, ‘said’, ‘will say’								Cog/lin	4
	27. When writing an English essay, I have trouble writing an introduction, some paragraphs to make my points, and a conclusion.								Cog/lin	4
	33. I don’t have enough time to finish my English writing exams or assignments in a limited time period..								Cog/lin	4
13	6. I have difficulty writing closing sentences for my paragraph								Cog/lin	3.87
14	28. Sometimes I start writing something, then in the end I write something else								Cog/lin	3.75
15	7. I have difficulty using articles (such as ‘a’, ‘the’, and ‘an’)								Cog/lin	3.5
	10. I have difficulty with word order in English sentences (such as . ‘How are you?’, ‘How you are?								Cog/lin	3.5
	26. I have difficulty summarizing my larger argument into a conclusion.								Cog/lin	3.5
	21. I find it difficult to go from one paragraph to another with smooth, well-connected transitions (such as ‘As a result’, ‘In addition’, or ‘In fact)								Cog/lin	3.5
16	12. I have difficulty using punctuation (such as ...?)								Cog/lin	3.37
17	1. I like to write English essays.								Psych/Emo	3.25
18	41. I feel my writing assignments are interesting and meaningful.								Psych/Emo	3.13
19	34. I feel comfortable revising my writing in English								Psych/Emo	3.12
20	3. It’s easy for me to keep my English writing going and write smoothly.								Cog/lin	2.75
20	5. It’s easy for me to write my ideas into English paragraphs.								Cog/lin	2.75
21	36. I am a skillful English writer								Soci/Cult	2.63
22	2. It’s easy for me to get started writing an English essay								Cog/lin	2.62
	13. I use few idioms (such as ‘Butterflies in my stomach’ or ‘Hit the road								Cog/lin	2.62
23	20. I know what run-on sentences are,  and I don’t use them								Cog/lin	2.6
24	45. I feel shy walking around as an ESOL student at school								Psvch/Emo	2.5
25	39. I feel comfortable with sharing my English writing with native English speakers								Soci/Cult	2.38
26	18. I am aware of what sentence fragments are, and I don’t use them.								Cog/lin	2